1. Proposal number
Proposal six
2. Should this proposal be considered for the Best Proposal prize? (yes/no)
Yes
3. On a scale of 1 to 10, how would you rate the overall organization/clarity
of the proposal? (1-10)
7
4. On a scale of 1 to 10, how would you rate the overall project idea? (1-10)
8
Feedback:
* Overall, is the proposal clear, concise, and well-organized?
The proposal seemed very detailed and descriptive. I wouldn't say it is too concise they could remove a
lot of extra detail and make sections more to the point, 21 pages is a long proposal. I'm not seeing how
the first and third goal relates to the title of the project. The organization seemed to flow according to
the proposal guidelines.
* Does the proposal meet the posted proposal guidelines?
They seemed to follow the format laid out in the project proposal guidelines.
* How does the project idea fit within the framework of Developmental Robotics?
The project has three main goals that are trying to be accomplished:
1. Develop mathematical apparatus for self-detection based on information theory. This seems very
inline with the subject matter of developmental robotics. Self-detection is currently a major research
focus within this subject.
2. Show that reduction in uncertainty can guide skill acquisition. Yes, this idea fits within the framework.
3. Formulate a research question about phase transitions in robotic systems that learn and develop.
Yes.
* Describe what you like BEST about the project idea.
Seems like a very ambitious project and well thought out. The path forward seems concrete and well
researched.
* Describe what you like LEAST about the project idea.
It seems like your second goal was already accomplished with results which I don't see as something
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suitable to put in for a proposal since it's already done. If you have more plans with this that I may have
missed then I would include that with your goals.
* Do you have any concerns about the project?
I mentioned before this seems ambitious but you know your limits and abilities and I don't. It also
seems like three different projects within this proposal. Each goal seems like it could be a project in and
of itself.
* Does it seem doable in the remaining time?
I know I wouldn't be able to accomplish all three goals by the end of this course. I would have actually
chosen to perform one of the three goals mentioned in the report and focused on that for this class. It
also would have cut down a lot on the length of the proposal.
* Does it seem too difficult?
Coming up with a new mathematical formula for self-detection seems pretty tough along with the other
two goals they are trying to achieve. They do seem to have a good foundation in their research and
seem to understand what they are trying to undertake. For me I know it would be too difficult.
* Are there any major details left out?
They seemed to cover all the major details of their project and gave very detailed descriptions.
* Does the idea rely upon technologies that are not currently available?
Doesn't seem so. They have all the technology readily available it seems to accomplish this project.
* Do you have any suggestions for improvement?
The only thing I would offer as a suggestion, and simply for the proposal is there is a lot of details that
could be part of your final report. A proposal should be shorter and simply explain the main points of
the projects and briefly highlight the methods that will be used.
* Do you have any suggestions for related work that should be cited?
None.
* Any other comments or suggestions?
None.